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The First Commandment

The First Commandment

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Chapter One



Chapter 1


Camp Delta

U.S. Naval Station

Guantanamo Bay, Cuba

When it was hot and humid, life in Cuba hovered somewhere between absolute misery and "the bath is ready does anyone have some razor blades?" But when it was cold and raining, Cuba was downright unbearable. Tonight was one of those nights.

When the guards arrived at the isolation cells of Delta's "Camp 5," where the most dangerous and highest-intelligence-value detainees resided, they were in a worse mood than usual. And it wasn't because of the weather. Something was wrong. It was written all over their faces as they pulled five prisoners from their cells and ordered them at gunpoint to strip.

Philippe Roussard hadn't been at Guantanamo the longest, but he had definitely been interrogated the hardest. A European of Arab descent, he was a sniper of extraordinary ability whose exploits were legendary. Videos of his kills played on continuous loops on jihadist websites across the internet. To his Muslim brothers he was nothing short of a superhero in the radical Islamist pantheon. To the United States, he was a horrific killing machine responsible for the deaths of over one hundred U.S. soldiers.

As Roussard looked into the eyes of his jailers, though, he saw more than the usual pure hatred. Tonight it was coupled with absolute disgust. Whatever middle-of-the-night interrogation tactic the Joint Task Force Guantanamo soldiers had in store for Roussard and his four colleagues, something told him it wasn't going to be like anything they had experienced before. The guards appeared on the verge of losing control.

Had an attack been successfully executed against the United States? What else could have put the soldiers in such a state?

If so, Roussard felt certain that the Americans would make the prisoners pay. Undoubtedly, they had devised yet another humiliating exercise designed to insult their prisoners' Muslim sensibilities. Privately, Roussard hoped the torture involved the attractive blond soldier and that she would disrobe down to her lacy, black lingerie and rub herself against him. Though he knew it was wrong, his fantasies of what he wanted to do to that woman were what kept him nicely occupied during the long, lonely hours of isolation he endured.

He was still speculating about his fate when he heard the door at the far end of the cell block shut. Roussard looked up, hoping it was the blond, but it wasn't. Another soldier had entered carrying five paper shopping bags. As he passed, he threw each of the prisoners a bag.

"Get dressed!" he ordered in awkward Arabic.

Confused, all of the prisoners, including Philippe, removed the civilian clothing from their bags and began to get dressed. The men cast furtive glances at one another as they tried to figure out what was happening. Roussard was reminded of stories he'd heard about Jewish concentration camp prisoners who were told they were being taken for showers when they were actually on their way to the gas chambers.

He doubted the Americans were dressing them in new clothes only to execute them, but nevertheless the uncertainty of what they were about to face filled him with more than a little trepidation.

"Why don't they try to make a run for it?" one of the guards whispered to his comrade as he stroked the trigger guard of his M-16. "I just want one of these fuckers to rabbit on us."

"This is bullshit," replied the other. "What the hell are we doing?"

"You two, shut up!" barked their commander, who then called in a series of commands over his radio.

Something definitely wasn't right.

Once they were completely clothed, shackles were placed around their wrists and ankles and they were lined up against the far wall.

This is it, thought Roussard as he held the stare of the soldier who had been hoping for one of the prisoners to make a run for it.

The soldier's finger went from his weapon's trigger guard to its actual trigger and he seemed about to say something when a series of vehicles ground to a halt just outside.

"That's us," shouted the Task Force commander. "Let's mount up."

The prisoners were shoved toward the door. Roussard hoped that once they got outside and he could see where they were going, things would make more sense.

That plan was dashed as one by one, black hoods were placed over each man's head before he was taken outside to a waiting column of green Humvees.



*


Ten minutes later, the convoy came to a stop. Before Roussard's heavy hood was removed, he could make out the distinct, high-pitched whine of idling jet engines.

On the rain-soaked tarmac, the prisoners stared up at an enormous Boeing 727 as their shackles were removed. A metal staircase had been rolled up against the side of the aircraft and its door stood wide open.

No one said a word, but based on the demeanor of the soldiers -- who seemed to have been ordered to keep their distance from the plane -- Roussard came to a stunning conclusion. Without being directed to do so, he took a step forward. When none of the soldiers tried to stop him, he took another and another until his feet touched the first metal step and he began climbing upward two at a time. His salvation was at hand! Just as he had known it eventually would be.

With the sound of the other prisoners pounding up the gangway behind him, Roussard stepped cautiously into the cabin. He was met by the plane's first officer, who compared his likeness to a photo on his clipboard, removed a heavy black envelope, and said, "We were told to give you this."

Roussard had received envelopes like this before. Without even opening it, he knew who it was from.

"If you wouldn't mind taking a seat," continued the first officer. "The captain is eager to be underway."

Roussard found an empty place near the window and buckled himself in. As the main cabin door was closed, several members of the flight crew disappeared into the rear of the aircraft and returned lugging odd-looking pieces of medical equipment, along with an equal number of large, plastic coolers.

None of it made any sense to Roussard until he opened the envelope and read its contents. A slow smile then began to spread across his face. It was done. Not only was he free, but the Americans would not be able to come after him. He was going to have his revenge -- and much sooner than he would have thought.

Opening his window shade, Roussard could see the soldiers climbing back into their Humvees and driving away from their airstrip, several with their hands hanging out the windows and their middle fingers raised in mock salute.

As the aircraft's engines roared to life and the heavy beast began to roll forward, cheers of "Allahu Akbar," God is great, erupted from the front of the plane.

Allah was indeed great, but Roussard knew it wasn't He who had arranged for their release. As he stared at the black envelope, he knew their gratitude was owed to someone much less benevolent.

Turning his attention back to the window as the soldiers quickly disappeared from view, Roussard cocked thumb and forefinger, took aim, and pulled an imaginary trigger.

Now that he was free, he knew that it was only a matter of time before his handler turned him loose inside America to exact his revenge.

Copyright © 2007 by Brad Thor

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Amazon Rating Thor, Brad, author May/22/2010

Book came quickly in very good condition. All his books are good and fun to read.

by Alan Milgrim (NY)

Amazon Rating Another good one. Apr/25/2010

This is another good read from Brad Thor. The pacing is very quick and it's loaded with action. If you enjoy Vince Flynn, A.J. Tata, Alex Berenson or Joel Rosenberg then you should try one (all?) of Thor's books.

by James ()

Amazon Rating Too verbose in descriptions Feb/07/2010

I really like Brad Thor's work and have read many of his books but this one was a bit of a drag, too much detailed description deterred from the plot and adventure.

by Mary Ann Larson ()

Amazon Rating Thor's best thus far Jan/14/2010

I've read a few of the previous novels in this series and think that this was the best so far. I don't think Thor is a great writer, kind of a lesser version of Vince Flynn, but I hope that with this title he is improving and perhaps can become better in future novels.

Harvath is the typical super soldier hero, beats all the terrorists by himself and ignores all the rules along the way because the end justifies the means. In this story I actually feel like I'm getting a sense of some reality with Harvath and while his pain and frustration is understandable his handling of beating up the bad guys in this one don't exactly jive with the end justifying the means. This story is filled with bad guys and worse guys, an almost untenable situation of potential bad that allows the powers that be to write of the minor sufferings along the way. But our favorite hero seems willing to accept putting others into greater risk because he believe he has to settle the score with the novel's great villian and can just send along his intel to his scores of trusted contacts that are still in the decision circle.

I enjoyed the interaction with the Troll and found him to be about the best character in the book because he is a bad SOB but doesn't try to hide behind anything--he's just out to make money, and will harm anyone that screws him. He points out that Scot can't keep riding off on the white horse when he spends so much time getting his hands filthy and that dialogue with Harvath and the end of the book have me interested in finding out where the hero goes next in life, and how he is going to be able to reconcile his humanity (the relationships with loved ones he can't always protect) with the humanity of those that want the same things as him (defeat of terrorists) and the humanity of the evil enemy that actually has calculated reasons for doing things and cannot always just be written off as a power hungry sociopath because power hungry sociopaths tend to hide behind men and women just trying to live a better life.

I don't know if Thor will ever be considered a great writer but works like this definately are worth me spending money on other novels.

by Jason Gibson (Michigan USA)

Amazon Rating The First Commandment Jan/03/2010

This is about a terrorist who is targeting the friends and family of an American Special Agent named Scot Harvath. Scot Harvath begins tracking five terrorists who were released from Gitmo (Guantanamo Bay). I reached the point at which the American Special Agent is torturing one of the terrorists - a Syrian Special Agent. I just could not "bond" with the main character, although I cared enough to read the last chapter to see if Scot Harvath survived -- which I do not say aye or nay here. I think the reason I didn't enjoy the book is that the author did not give the characters much "character" but concentrated on their actions. There really has to be a happy medium between "action" and "character."

by dewt (Hereford, AZ, USA)

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About the Book

Thou shalt not negotiate with terrorists.

The president of the United States has broken the nation's number-one commandment, and by doing so has put himself in the crosshairs of America's number-one counter-terrorism operative, Scot Harvath.

Prologue, two years previously: Guantanamo Bay, Cuba. In the dead-of-night, five of the most dangerous detainees in the war on terror are pulled from their isolation cells, held at gunpoint, and told to strip off their orange jumpsuits. The prisoners are issued civilian clothes and driven to the base airfield, where they are loaded aboard a black Boeing 727 that whisks them away to freedom.

Flash forward to the present day: Scot Harvath awakes to find that his girlfriend, Tracy Hastings, has been killed, and that the assassin has left behind a very strange calling card. The doorframe above Harvath's entryway has been painted with blood, but not just any blood. Analysis indicates that the killer used lamb's blood tainted with a unique radioactive isotope. The isotope is part of a top-secret program the United States developed to covertly track the movements of the nation's worst enemies.

Angered with the lack of cooperation he is receiving, and against the direct orders of the president, Harvath mounts his own operation to hunt down Tracy's killers and to exact revenge. It's a quest that will thrust everything he holds dear, including his life, into absolute peril.


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